This is a very interesting piece. The style is beautiful and the topic is... also nice. But together they cause an interesting sense of the pleasant vs. the not so much. The girls arms seem to give the most issue, they seem to frail or off, but I love her hands, so detailed and interesting. A very cool pic indeed, keep up the great work!
The story is very sad but a perfect example of what it's like to try to live life as something different. As a Pegasus I try to stretch my wings and fly to a happier place, only to be held down and have humans stomp on my wings until they are broken.
The girl's hair is the same color as her pony's. Shame that all those commentors thought the writing was bad; the story was much better-written than most of the Healia fanfiction I read (or attempt to read), haha.